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Very impressed
though the proportions are great, the perspective is a little wacky. especially on roxas, he looks a little squished or flat. sora's legs also seemed to be warped, or bending in ways that legs dont usually bend.
next is expression. you did great at expressing their emotions and determination (especially roxas's hatred) through their stance. their faces are another story... they look to be exaggerated with no light in their eyes. almost as if they were posing, only pretending to be angery.
sora on the ground is done great, even the little tiny sliver we see.
i gave this four and a half stars in vision because of the positions you chose and more importantly the angle. this is a very hard angle to pull of and you did it very well
i gave this one star in originality because you made this from a part in the game, platform and all.
i gave you four stars in technique mainly for your coloring skills, they are phenomenal.
i gave you three stars in impact because of the situation choice. A very interesting part of the game, when sora and roxas finally meet. a very good choice indeed.
overall i like the picture and i think you did a very good job on it! good work, i hope i brought some things to you that you can try to work on. no one is perfect, remember that!
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